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    dots Submission Name: Breathe dots
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    Author: MurphyGirl44
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 70/76/25
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 27
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsBreathe dots
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    Inhale
    the stars above
    the road below
    naked beneath your plain white nightgown
    naked beneath the galaxy's stare
    close your eyes for a moment
    you feel nothing
    and everything
    in one instant
    a sense of losing everything
    but the hope of finding it again
    thoughts swirling through your mind
    a breeze tugs at you
    strings you along throughout time and space
    heart first into a black hole we call life
    it pushes you until you feel like...
    you can't go on any longer
    but you do, and you will
    and that is when you can
    exhale




    Submitted on 2008-07-31 03:53:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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