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Eternally spotless, boundless space
The cold snowy stare, the white pale face
A canvas to be filled, but with what?
So transparent; you see through my thoughts
Controlling my words like the wave and a bird
Drowning out my voice, increasing the parts
On this page, the silent art
Shall overcome the artist's heart.......
| hey good writing i kinda didn't follow it but it flowed okay I guess but good writing keep at it |
|| Posted on 2008-08-01 00:00:00 | by anguished_child | [ Reply to This ] || i dont know what you are writting about exactly but it still flows well.. execpt there are huge spaces... its poetry man, the words are the art... Not the spaces or the clever way you posted the write... i could just be biased. sorry to be rude but this is a site for constructive critisism.. liked the muse.||| Posted on 2008-08-01 00:00:00 | by snacky fish | [ Reply to This ] |