Is It Almost Over by Crestfallenman

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Submission Name: Is It Almost Over dots

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Author:	Crestfallenman
ASL Info:	21/M/CA
Elite Ratio:	4.7 - 593/819/331
Words:	41

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	58
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	346

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Is It Almost Over dots

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Darkened,
The silence,
Hidden within,
The bitter end.
The trust,
Exploration,
Dancing with shadows,
Tranquille salvation,
Lost on a razors edge.
Disappear,
A world lost under its own devastation.
A world lost in its fever,
A world lost from it's priorities.

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