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    dots Submission Name: ..love?dots
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    Author: kickit
    ASL Info:    18/F/ON
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 14/5/6
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 81
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1143



    Description:
       A friend told me a story, about the relationship that almost destroyed her life. I wrote this (with permission) about how she felt the whole time.


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    dots..love?dots
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    I cannot breathe because you stole my breath away.
    I cannot speak because you've taken all my words away.
    I remember our first kiss, and your delicious lies. I remember our fights, ending with your twisted sheets between my thighs. But who can forget the moments when I cried?

    I lay here, curled up into a ball, staring at the scar you branded into my arm.
    I remember the first hit: you didn't like the way I laughed.
    Does it bother you that you've cut my back, and left me wtih three long scars?

    When I look into the mirror I remember the days when we watched the sun rise, but then I look closer and notice the burn under my right eye. You took that stick & shoved it, but I forced myself not to cry.

    You cooked me dinner after those peaceful 6 months that slipped by, and then you told me that I had ruined you and your life.
    You beat me every night, screaming 'whore, slut, cow' and when I tried to leave you, you hit me from behind.

    I hate you, I thought I loved you, but now I know that I can live without you.




    Submitted on 2008-07-31 20:50:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      you should go back and beat his ass, the coward f.uckstain.
    losers like that make me so angry.
    i'm sorry that had to happen to you.
    no-one needs wastes of space like that maggot ex-boyfriend of yours.
    | Posted on 2008-08-03 00:00:00 | by penisenvy | [ Reply to This ]



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