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    dots Submission Name: All I Have Leftdots
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    Author: sapphyreravyn
    ASL Info:    16/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.45 - 3/15/21
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
    Total Views: 61
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 548



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    dotsAll I Have Leftdots
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    I'm stuck in this whirlwind
    The air slowly leaving me breathless
    Different emotions
    Flood my senses.
    They leave me broken
    They leave me lost.
    I want to run,
    But I can't move.
    I plead for the end
    Anything to get out of this place
    I'm crying
    In pain,
    In anger,
    In regret.
    I know it is wrong
    But I can't stop hating you.
    You take all I have
    You ask for more.
    And I am left
    With only this vortex.




    Submitted on 2008-08-02 03:18:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Once again, another good write. Such strong emotions... If I couldn't already relate it'd be much easier to critique! And even if I couldn't your words are so strong, I do believe it would make one such as a reader feel as if they were going through that of which you are. Keep it up.


    Calenrodiel
    | Posted on 2008-08-02 00:00:00 | by night_angel | [ Reply to This ]



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