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    dots Submission Name: Alonedots
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    Author: sapphyreravyn
    ASL Info:    16/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.45 - 3/15/21
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
    Total Views: 78
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsAlonedots
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    Help me out of this corner.
    I can't seem to move on my own.
    I need someone
    To take care of me.
    I have no one.
    The urges
    Are so powerful sometimes
    I want to laugh
    I want to cry.
    Am I a lost cause?
    Have all given up hope?
    I deal with your problems
    Only to be left alone with my own.
    I do not complain
    I live to help.
    So why won't anyone help me?




    Submitted on 2008-08-02 03:23:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a poem in which I can relate. Alone... no one to help you, but you're the one they all turn too. *sigh* You are surely not a lost cause and I do not even know you. However, this piece was so intense, it almost sounds as if you're panicked... Just relax and keep up the good work. Happy Writings!

    Calenrodiel
    | Posted on 2008-08-02 00:00:00 | by night_angel | [ Reply to This ]
      It is because you are alone.
    This is a good write, I even like it.


    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-08-02 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]



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