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    dots Submission Name: all you think.dots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsall you think.dots
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    She lost herself
    in all the noise
    couldn't find her way home
    broken inside, bleeding again
    it was sad to watch it all come down on her
    watch her drowning deep inside
    it was beautiful to watch her scream
    the pain was written on her face
    she couldn't get away
    they tried to help, they tried so hard
    she was in a million pieces
    and know one understood
    I was there, from the start
    I picked up the pieces
    I glued and I mended
    she's not perfect and she's not whole
    she works at it everyday
    and it makes me smile to see the joy on her face
    you ask me how I know?
    That she is me and I am stronger then all you think.




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