Passionate? by PryncessVynom

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Author:	PryncessVynom
ASL Info:	23/F/WV!!
Elite Ratio:	3.35 - 1001/1073/242
Words:	204

Class/Type:	Prose/Passion
Total Views:	203
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	1038

Description:
I don't know if this counts as prose, but thats what I'm sticking it as cause I know its not poetry.

Passionate? dots

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I've noticed something. When I fall for something I fall hard. I met someone on the phone through a misdialed number and a week later I was in love. We had phone sex every night. I cried when his phone was disconnected. I almost sent money to him just because he asked.
I almost rode a bus to go see him.

I met a guy on here. We wrote a few poems to each other ending in '....' and I fell in love with him. I believed him when he said he felt he was flawed and that I was just to good for him. (Fallen for that line twice now. I know I'm not to good for anyone. Not now anyway) I cried when he said that he would rip the stars from my eyes, and the moon from my sky. I told him he already had, and that I was an empty sky, a broken vessel, a dried up well after him. Never met him. That all happened within maybe two weeks of 'meeting' him on here.

I'm a very passionate person. I am a very stupid person.

Those two never mix well.

Submitted on 2008-08-02 09:06:19 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I can really identify with this. I suffer (not sure this is right word) from the same problem. I have been lucky enough, in the past, for the object of my affections to fall hard too and that is amazing but more often than not it ends badly.

I wish I could give you some advice but if you take a look at my submissions you'll realise that I'm in no position unfortunately. I hope you at least find some comfort in knowing you're not alone in being this way.
| Posted on 2008-08-03 00:00:00 | by chilliboy | [ Reply to This ]
  "I believed him when he said he felt he was flawed and that I was just to good for him."

I hate that line almost as much as I can understand it. Sometimes people say that and honestly believe it.

"I told him he already had, and that I was an empty sky, a broken vessel, a dried up well after him. "

I know that feeling, though probably not after a few weeks. I can understand that kind of hurt though.

"I'm a very passionate person. I am a very stupid person."
I think being passionate leads one to behaving in stupid ways. I know I do.

I don't know what to say here about the falling too fast bit. I've fallen hard for people in less than six months, I don't know if that's fast by other standards, but from what is written here, that's taking time. My difficulty is in letting go.

I don't know your situation or anything, but do you have self-esteem issues or some such? Because a week or two just seems way to quick and (not to be mean) near desperate. The fastest I fell for someone was when I was feeling my lowest, so I think that has some relation.

I can't say don't let it get to you or you don't know what you're talking about because I believe people know how they feel better than the people scolding them, I can only say that I understand and I hope things get better and if you do feel poorly about yourself, do something that will give you more self-confidence.

All that basic not very useful advice people give, ya know?
| Posted on 2008-08-03 00:00:00 | by Sir Jimeth | [ Reply to This ]
  I share your problem,
I've been in your shoes,
I know that feeling of pain,
Of feeling broken and abused,

Of not being able to understand,
Why you can hurt so much;
When you have never really knew him,
Let alone felt his touch.

No man is worth your tears,
The one who is won't make you cry,
He shall only comfort you,
He would never say goodbye.

You are better than what you think,
To good for many of the men.
Still there will come a day,
When you will love again.

But this love will be a different sort,
So hold your head up high.
Raise your standards; raise your bar!
And don't be afraid to reach for the sky.

I was just as sensitive as you were once, although I believe you're older than me. I learned my lessons early on and I learned them well. For everytime I had a repeat lesson, I felt like I would die... so complete was the pain I felt. But this is what I did to help myself...I raised my bar. Not just any man was good enough for me. I raised my head, I let my confidence in myself grow and I let people see me for me. I put myself first; which was most difficult, and realized that if he let his phone go, what would he do with me? I'm only coincidentally on the recieving end now, what about if we were together? I found friends, people I can rely on no matter what happens. Many of the friends were friends previously, so I knitted my friendship circle closer and had them there to help break my fall when it inevitably happens. One more thing, I shared... not unlike your doing now, but I also learned from it. Try and take a lesson away from this! That way not everything is lost. Good write and Happy Writings!

Calenrodiel

P.S. If you need someone to talk to on here.... look me up! Good luck!

| Posted on 2008-08-02 00:00:00 | by night_angel | [ Reply to This ]
  Poet's share stories of our feelings, fellings and our flaws. That's a line from one of my poems(not posted) Hi, my name is Bobby K and I am
(The Poor Man's Poet) and no, this is not a come on. My motto is that I write for poeple and poet's alike, and each poem is a piece of the poet. I said all that to say this, Nice write.
You are a good witer because you speak from
your heart. Now Me, I'm just an old guy who like's to entertain. So... If you could use a smile
read some of my work like: (As A Poet) or ( A Spoken Word Poem) and my new piece
(My Friend With Privileges) I like to use Humor when ever I can. There is to much sadness in the world today. I hope I haven't said to much.
Oh, and by the way, Its nice to meet you.

The Poor Man's Poet.
| Posted on 2008-08-02 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]

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