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    dots Submission Name: Winter Abbeydots
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    Author: Algol46
    ASL Info:    200/m/East of Eden
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 1042/1119/535
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWinter Abbeydots
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    I mark the wind at midnight sweep
    Across the winter fell and burn,
    I watch it spool and gust and turn
    To drive pale sleet where spirits sleep.

    Then up the bald tor, high and steep,
    It drives the snow, the world to thrall,
    I watch dead aspens crack and fall
    While from its branches goblins leap.

    Above the lake the abbey stands,
    Its gray walls seeming old as Time
    Its battlements now caked with rime,
    While near oak branches scrape like hands.

    The monks sequestered in their cells
    Pray at this appointed hour,
    Chimes from out the steeple tower
    Are rung from ancient bronze cast bells.

    The wind enlivens, leads those prayers
    Back across the fell and burn
    Then up the tor I watch it turn
    Rise heavenward on starry stairs.





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      This is filled with serene and ghostly images! As usual, it is exquisitively penned, and a delight to read! One can picture grey and solitary monks chanting to a cold and jarring winter scene outside the Winter Abbey!

    Sorry that I haven't commented in a spell; I'm just back from two-weeks holiday, which I spent at the Ranch with my Sister and her family from Illinois.
    | Posted on 2008-08-04 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Very Nice, I love the way the Goblins leaping from branches in the tulmoltuous [ok I KILLED tha word] snow contrasts with the serenity of the Praying Monks in the Abbey.

    ~Carrie
    | Posted on 2008-08-03 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]


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