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    dots Submission Name: IThank God For You.dots

    Author: xXCptn_SephyXx
    ASL Info:    22/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 46/119/104
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsIThank God For You.dots

    Goodbye, Reaper,
    A divorce is demanded.
    But he refuses to let go of my hand.

    As the moon glistens softly over dark waters,
    I slip from the bed beside my old lover
    Pack my heart, mind and soul
    And leave him dancing in a dream of awe.

    Departure sets my body free—
    And the cuffs of despair melt when I notice a light—
    A light standing atop a hill outside my wedlock home.

    With a smile spread across my face,
    I run;
    Run far away—
    Into the arms of the light—
    My new lover.

    Submitted on 2008-08-03 03:33:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This very good, I enjoyed the read. Leaving someone can be a very difficult thing but you must always follow your heart no matter how painful it is. Never put your happiness in jeapordy! I liked the wording, very nicely done. Overall I'd say "A" for effort. Keep writing! Great job :).

    | Posted on 2008-08-04 00:00:00 | by my_worst_fear85 | [ Reply to This ]

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