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    dots Submission Name: Tobacco Birdsdots
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    Author: Cloacina
    ASL Info:    25/F/KY
    Elite Ratio:    7.78 - 20/23/22
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 44
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1252



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       Do ya'll think the vine and fruit reference is too cliché this way?


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    dotsTobacco Birdsdots
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    Mommy's head lay
    on heart's parallel
    twixt rocky tent mountains,
    each night,
    where it had lain
    in light's absence
    muscles cupped round,
    like clasped hands.

    When she was born
    she escaped
    through
    pelvic bone valley
    into screaming light.

    Each day
    poverty and instinct
    drove her to flat land
    cutting money from ground
    in the shape of tobacco.

    Small women
    looking like large birds
    drug bundles in
    from green fields,
    arms stretched back
    two wings,
    raking splayed leaf tails
    over dusty ground.

    They hung
    bright feathers
    in slanted barns
    to wither with
    parched skin
    in the sun
    where mom toiled
    pulling ripe melons and squash
    from roped gardens.

    She said it was
    woman's duty
    to helped feed her family,
    whether by soft breast,
    or hard garden hoe,
    and to bear bloody fruit,
    she plucked 9 of them
    off uterine vines,
    when ripe flesh fell,
    womb pushing
    molting birds
    from their nests.




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