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My Best Friend


Author: trynfinity
ASL Info:    38/f/California
Elite Ratio:    4.43 - 149 /145 /91
Words: 121
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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For my husband


My Best Friend



My Best Friend


Through good and bad
the best the rough.
You are my reason
to not give up.

You keep me going
when I start to fall.
Hold me close
when I feel so small.

All we've gone through
fought and shared.
You've remained my best friend
always there.

I cannot say what the future holds
the trials the ease
it's impossible to know.

But whatever may come
I know in my heart.
Together or separate
as one or apart.

You'll be there
my best friend, like you have from the start.

Thank you
I love you.
You're the best part of me.

My best friend
my lover,
Forever yours
me.




Submitted on 2008-08-03 09:58:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  mmm its not bad but I just am not into love poems one thing i may try to work on is to me this sounds very similar to the other one you posted for your husband.

Jackz
| Posted on 2009-07-05 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]


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