Sign up to EliteSkills

Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password


Author: trynfinity
ASL Info:    38/f/California
Elite Ratio:    4.43 - 149 /145 /91
Words: 221
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
Total Views: 632
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 1389


For my husband


I know sometimes I lose it
sometimes I freak completely out.
I don't trust and I accuse and question
my mind is full of doubt,

I know in my heart you love me
I know I also that I fall short .
No matter what I lack in giving
you've always given me support.

I know you're still my hero
my knight who saves the day.
You're still the keeper of my soul
you still chase my bad away.

Everyday I dream of you
where you're happy and full filled.
That it's me that makes this happen
it's me who knows your will.

Everyday you're there for me
you've never given up.
My strength, my rock, my infinity
my friend, my heart, my love.

Through good and bad you've been there
always at my side.
Even when I didn't deserve it
You never let me hide.

Sometimes I know I make it hard
hard to like or love me as I am.
Yet there you are
you find away
to love me and be my friend.

For all you do I notice it
I see it and it means so much.
I feel it and that means so much more
it's there always in your touch.

July 1,2008
for my husband.

Submitted on 2008-08-03 09:58:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!


  I know you're still my hero
my knight who saves the day.
You're still the keeper of my soul
you still chase my bad away.

I love this part!!! I'm very jealous... Although majority of the time I am not one who like "love" posts this I do enjoy you touch each base instead of just speaking of only one aspect of the relationship with your husband you mention all. You mention your weakness,hopes, feelings. I love the way you have this flow mostly I like that, the words seem to just stream out of your heart and onto the page.. Lovely write

again very jealous!! your husband is a lucky man

| Posted on 2009-07-05 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]

Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?