I like this piece a lot, I think mainly because I can relate to it. To me this is a poem of young love, head over heals slowly rolling downhill until it breaks apart. It's sad, but as we all know somethings must come to an end. Over all you did a great job on this, i like the wording and the imagery it creates. Very good work, and I hope to read more soon!
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