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    dots Submission Name: With Love From John dots
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    Author: nephthys
    ASL Info:    17/F/U.S.A
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 10/6/6
    Words: 322
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 665
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    dotsWith Love From John dots
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    Warm and loving,
    Graceful and compassionate.
    You were perfect in all things, my beautiful wife.

    The mother of my children.
    My better half.
    You accomplished far more worthwhile,
    than I even dreamed of doing.

    Loved by all who knew you,
    and even loved by those who only knew of you.
    You, my darling wife.
    Regal Duchess by day.
    Warm and passionate lover at night.

    Oh how I grieved when you were taken from me.
    I vowed never to marry again,
    for who else could complete me as you had.
    I did my best with our children,
    they were a godsend.
    The one thing that kept me sane in the darkest moments of my grief.
    For they were our children, and therefore a connection to you,
    my beloved.

    England mourned you, love.
    Love, yes thats what I called you.
    For no other endearment seemed adequate.
    And so you were my love,
    my one and only.

    How I rejoiced when our souls were reunited in the world beyond.
    I can honestly say that I had never been happier than I was at that moment,
    when I found you waiting patiently on the other side.
    I never wanted to let you go again.
    Eternity together would have been perfect,
    but alas, a soul as beautiful as yours couldnít remain in the beyond indefinitely.

    I wait for you now my love,
    Iíll wait an eternity if I have to.
    I count the days until your soul returns to mine,
    but until that day I am content to watch from a distance,
    as you live out the life chosen for you.

    Fear not my love, for I will never be far from you.
    For no matter what body your soul resides in,
    my soul will always find yours.




    Submitted on 2008-08-04 03:41:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I always appreciate a good poem without rhyme. It seems difficult for young writers to pull off. I love the emotion evoked through this poem, and the love that is so well expressed. Good job!
    | Posted on 2008-08-06 00:00:00 | by iKnowWhoIAmNow | [ Reply to This ]


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