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    dots Submission Name: What I Seedots
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    Author: lostinside
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    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    dotsWhat I Seedots
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    Finding myself
    The who I use to be
    This person before you
    Its not really me

    I lost myself
    I'm not sure on which day
    How long will it take
    I can't really say

    Though to you the same
    Is how I appear
    You don't see inside my head
    You don't see all that I fear

    When I look at me
    I don't see what you do
    I'd rather not look at all
    I'd rather you not too

    I'll go on pretending
    That things are okay
    I'll keep on hoping
    That I'll end up that way




    Submitted on 2008-08-04 04:43:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      So sweet.
    i love how it rhymes yet it explains so clearly
    confusion, pretending, and hoping
    | Posted on 2008-08-05 00:00:00 | by LovelyGoddess | [ Reply to This ]



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