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    dots Submission Name: Forced Bachelor dots
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    Author: KeshavKudva
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/5
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsForced Bachelor dots
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    T'is that time
    Of the annum again
    Whence better half
    Goes tripsying off
    To mother yard again

    T'is time normally
    To glee and gloat
    To dig up closed closets
    To turn bachelor again

    T'is the late nights
    The long stay outs
    The lost party times
    The time soon ripe
    To make merry again

    Yet this time seems adrift
    Old merry mongers seem
    Clowns, mere jestless fools
    Loins no longer lust
    Heart merely craves
    That this time be spent
    Await athrift the return
    Of a Beloved, back home.





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