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    dots Submission Name: Midnight Poetry at it's best. dots
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    Author: BestxDeceptions
    ASL Info:    18, Female, Kentucky.
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 22/49/41
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 109
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsMidnight Poetry at it's best. dots
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    It's one A.M.
    I'm craving coffee
    and the smell of weed.
    Call me crazy.

    It's 2 A.M.
    I can't just call you.
    I'm most sure,
    that you're asleep.

    When you dream,
    do I creep in?
    Have I ever,
    made you smile?

    It's 3 A.M.
    I shouldn't be smoking.
    It's a nasty habit.
    I should quit.

    It's 4 A.M
    I'm thinking that
    sometimes you look
    a lot like, that one guy.

    What do you
    think of me?
    Am I someone
    you could need?

    It's 5 A.M.
    That bird,
    won't stop singing.
    Before sunrise,
    I'll go crazy.

    It's 6 A.M.
    I need coffee.
    It's not a craving.
    It's necessary.
    There's no way I can sleep.

    When you sleep,
    do you wake
    wishing I
    woke beside you?

    It's 7 A.M
    and I'm long gone.




    Submitted on 2008-08-04 17:46:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      That could almost be a song. At 6am you seem adamant as though you will never surrender to sleep but then at 7 your out like a light. That was kinda funny. Coffee and weed....hmmm...cotton mouth....hmmm....
    | Posted on 2008-08-08 00:00:00 | by ArchusMuta | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice poem
    to go in sequence,
    you did well with expressing your thought,
    how you mostly think of him
    | Posted on 2008-08-05 00:00:00 | by LovelyGoddess | [ Reply to This ]


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