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    dots Submission Name: My dearest.dots
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    Author: BestxDeceptions
    ASL Info:    18, Female, Kentucky.
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 22/49/41
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 110
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 657



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    dotsMy dearest.dots
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    I want to
    write for you,
    because you say
    it's something more.

    Each stanza I
    play, tells a story.
    It's my diary.
    My life lays here.

    It's an opera.
    I write it wisely.
    Each passing day,
    a chapter unfolds.

    I write to
    spill my hurt,
    to kill my greed,
    to share my tears.

    How do I write
    for you?
    I'm not so sure,
    that I can.

    When you give
    me reasons to
    hide my pride,
    I will write for you.

    Until then,
    I stand silent.




    Submitted on 2008-08-04 17:46:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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