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    dots Submission Name: Resisting Truthdots
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    Author: vampirefreak69
    Elite Ratio:    2.19 - 30/99/82
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsResisting Truthdots
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    Love can create
    the most unlikely combinations.
    Defying criticism
    but never truly overcoming reality,
    they are, for a moment,
    as one,
    as if anything was possible
    in this judgmental world.




    Submitted on 2008-08-04 19:00:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can not say that i relate too much to this piece. I have never felt so uplifted by love or by any such feeling. I would say, however, that this poem is well written.
    | Posted on 2008-08-05 00:00:00 | by Old | [ Reply to This ]


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