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Author:	vampirefreak69
Elite Ratio:	2.19 - 30/99/82
Words:	122

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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Of Few Words dots

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Phantom winds swirl, spiral, and scream
Clouds, bruised in purple and blue part
Only, to reform into looming midnight monsters
Lights flicker fighting for life
I whisper in the silence of the room...

It will be one of those nights.

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