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    dots Submission Name: Stolen Romancedots
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    Author: Mooncatcher
    ASL Info:    17 / F / Australia
    Elite Ratio:    4.34 - 13/23/8
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 75
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1019



    Description:
       I wrote this for anyone who wishes to say that i stole it from user Jellycat. Jellycat is the account that i created in order to post this poem, but have stupidly forgotten what email adress or password it had on it.

    To clarify i actually have a Cat who is called Jelly i will happily show pictures of my darling princess


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    dotsStolen Romancedots
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    Late nights, Early mornings
    Long glances, Hidden feelings

    Blood racing
    Shhh
    Keep it quiet

    He starts stirring
    Rolling over, restless moving
    Sound asleep

    Look at what we've begun

    You touch my leg, I hold your hand
    We kiss in secret, and steal romance

    He doesn't notice
    Unawear
    An enigma

    Let's start to dare

    Your hands are warm, my skin is soft
    Desperate Passion, silky Touch

    Fantasy lust, create perfection
    Memorable faces, your beautiful reflection

    Secrets reveal, mirrors so vain
    Dealings so dangerous

    I never say your name

    A tumbling plunge, deeply bounded
    Mysteriously opened, by darkness surrounded

    you've stopped coming and never call

    Are you frightened by our passion?
    Are you frightened? and scared to fall!




    Submitted on 2008-08-05 04:12:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Personally,

    I loved this.

    Your composition was edgy and fresh. You had a sense of eloquence and, in some ways, i could relate very closely to this piece.

    I noticed a typo. but I am a typo monster.
    Unawear should be Unaware, no?
    small mistake, but mine evil eyes see those kinds of things.

    I really did like this, a lot. I am going to favorite it.
    Sorry about the length of the comment(short)
    but I am on very little sleep, and if i continued to ramble, it would get kind of....odd.

    Peace, love, and cupcakes.

    -Courtney
    | Posted on 2008-08-05 00:00:00 | by CourtneyLynne | [ Reply to This ]



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