This was written very well. The flow was a little off in the third stanza, but other than that it was very good.
I do have to say that it was very vague. You didn't say why she was this way.
It wasn't completely cliché. Besides everything's been done before anyway.
It was a great poem. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading
Nice. you did a good job here in explaining the insanity that comes from not being able to express yourself anylonger. the poem has a pretty nice flow. this poem reminds me alot of how i feel. i feel sometimes that i must escape, but i know that would be a bad response to the sensation of feeling helpless. A good response should be holding still and not panicing.
hey when the hard times come try to be happy do something to get your mind of it b/c like you wrote the envy consumer her pain can do the same I was once there myself so if writing is the only way to get out then go for it write write and write but don't let the pain and anger win b/c at the end you will be the one who losses .
well great writing by the way .