The Amount of Earth and Rock, Indescribable by Runningboard

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Submission Name: The Amount of Earth and Rock, Indescribable dots

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Author:	Runningboard
ASL Info:	25/m/LA
Elite Ratio:	0.93 - 0/0/2
Words:	75

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	680
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The Amount of Earth and Rock, Indescribable dots

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After long live ideas live long after
Forget buried miner he sings widow notes

Deep mine canary
Poor bandage mistake

Century of riches steamboat and the Ford
Eight men strike through coal and this much silver ore

The same stance of men
Inside children's ward

You would take eight lives, commit murder most foul
If you could go back with just what you know now

Soak red pigment dye
Aibohphobia

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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