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Submission Name:
The Amount of Earth and Rock, Indescribable
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Author:
Runningboard
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25/m/LA
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0.93 - 0/0/2
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75
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The Amount of Earth and Rock, Indescribable
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After long live ideas live long after
Forget buried miner he sings widow notes
Deep mine canary
Poor bandage mistake
Century of riches steamboat and the Ford
Eight men strike through coal and this much silver ore
The same stance of men
Inside children's ward
You would take eight lives, commit murder most foul
If you could go back with just what you know now
Soak red pigment dye
Aibohphobia
Submitted on 2008-08-05 09:04:21
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