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    dots Submission Name: The Dreamdots
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    Author: BrokenAngelKat
    ASL Info:    18-F-NC
    Elite Ratio:    1.67 - 102/231/186
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 54
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 519



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    dotsThe Dreamdots
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    A starry night sky..
    A field of flowers..
    One single princess..
    Endless hours..

    A brush at her hand..
    A prince at her side..
    A kiss on her cheek..
    A moonlit ride..

    Laying under the stars..
    With her head on his chest..
    Not a care in the world..
    No reason to be distressed..

    All her cares melt away..
    But then there's a buzzing..
    And she knows he cant stay..

    Her dream has ended.




    Submitted on 2008-08-05 17:58:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It seems like the person expressing themself in this poem changes from male to female or something. I don't know but somehow I couldn't relate or get a feel for it.
    | Posted on 2008-08-08 00:00:00 | by ArchusMuta | [ Reply to This ]



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