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Fluid


Author: MC white
ASL Info:    20/Male/Ohio
Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 71 /73 /45
Words: 126
Class/Type: Misc /Sorry
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Description:




Fluid



I'm fluid and knew it
since I was a young boy dancin'
just a brand new product
of my parents romancin'
but that same romancing
turned me on my ear
and now my girls can't get close to me
because I have this fear
of their female while's
leavin me in denial
so I hide like a child
when they ask me to smile
I'm so insecure
that in my dreams they combine
every girl, every face, every moment in time
Every love I express gets thrown back in my face
not in reality but in my mind, this is solely the case
so I apologize to you if
I leave you grasping
at straws for my affection
its just my personalities clashing.




Submitted on 2008-08-05 18:14:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  truth, been there buddy. been there. amen
| Posted on 2008-08-29 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]


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