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    dots Submission Name: Broken Heartsdots
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    Author: broken heart
    ASL Info:    22/F/England
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 2/4/4
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsBroken Heartsdots
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    Tears of an angel
    fall silently
    over pale cheeks
    of the beautiful face she hides from the world

    Blood of her lover
    stains her hands
    from the dagger
    so rightfully plunged
    into his deceiving heart

    Darkness of the night
    seeps through her soul
    like the evil leech
    of some untold foulness
    that reeks of its own loathing

    Tears of a marked women
    fall no more
    she will not run
    she will not hide
    for justice has been done
    and justice has been served.




    Submitted on 2008-08-05 19:13:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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