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    Author: schemingdevil22
    ASL Info:    17/female/lawrenceburg
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 26/32/25
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 42
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    Bytes: 640



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    on a quest
    to find myself tonight
    through the blurred lines
    of black and white

    Lost myself along the way
    Trying to keep your demons at bay
    forgot the things for which i used to stand
    and now they lay broken in this used up wasteland

    Barely breathing, on the inside im seething
    Cant believe i actually cared so much
    Anymore I wouldnt give a fuck

    (washed this part)(maybe it'll come back to me)

    so now i can honestly say
    "Guess we all have our parts to play,
    Hope your happy in my own small way."




    Submitted on 2008-08-06 00:33:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Title "My Own Way"? or "Knowing my way"? A title that defines what is most strongly expressed.
    | Posted on 2008-08-07 00:00:00 | by ArchusMuta | [ Reply to This ]
      The persona in the poem is in search of self-realisation and indeed actuallisation hence the lines:

    on a quest
    to find myself tonight (line 1 & 2)

    In the process ther came confusion as in:

    Lost myself along the way (line 5) and in:

    forgot the things for which i use to stand (line 7)

    though at the end of the poem the aim is achieved as in:

    so now i can honestly say
    "guess we all have our part to play"

    It's a nice poem. I love it.

    | Posted on 2008-08-07 00:00:00 | by haske | [ Reply to This ]



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