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    dots Submission Name: Mr. A-Zdots
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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    18/M/Ohio State
    Elite Ratio:    6.06 - 174/189/127
    Words: 248
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 198
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 1581



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    dotsMr. A-Zdots
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    Jazzy upbeat rhythms written and spent in silence:
    note to note, beat the beaten path.
    The gentle giant has a voice that projects,
    and a smile that sets fire to still-life,
    and calms the wicked tempers of the everyday folk.
    Dance hard, play hard, make a little time with her,
    bringing friends to back porch shadows,
    and passing that pipe around the moonshine.
    Seconds passing in nightly daydreamin’ minds
    paint pictures of the listless few:
    Murals of the soft-spoken with colors that are loud.
    Screaming to be heard where a voice could live without an ear:
    Separate their lives, from the lives of you and me.
    A block party now, in the middle of the street;
    You can hear all their screams when he arrives on the scene
    to cover the wonderment of people and their government,
    as they need to forget everything they were forced to remember.
    Like next door neighbors from the the land down under
    with that playful accentuated voice and tour pass
    to pass away the day with you, the one and only Mraz man;
    Not the whole band, just you and him.
    In backseat summertime cars with ambitions set too far
    ahead for the normal folk to reach or breach the pessimism
    that lies dormant in the normal torment of everyday life,
    that tried and true sense of self-satisfaction is what brought us
    to spend a little bit of pocket change in this engaging exchange,
    or quiet corner-alley type of transaction.





    Submitted on 2008-08-06 01:13:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I luv this...
    Murals of the soft-spoken with colors that are loud.
    Screaming to be heard where a voice could live without an ear
    wowie...i luv it
    keep writing
    <3
    | Posted on 2008-08-12 00:00:00 | by koolness | [ Reply to This ]


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