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Christmas in July (from me, to you)

Author: silentpoison
ASL Info:    22/F/Teh Shire
Elite Ratio:    2.67 - 204 /259 /118
Words: 86
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Christmas in July (from me, to you)

You set me down
To slowly unwrap me
Delicately unraveling
Tearing me down to bare threads
Treading lightly
As to not to soil the intricacy
to what you been given
a gift
the tag on the sleeve says
To you
From me
The surprise is in my eyes
And for you my dear
A smile
Worth a thousand words
And a picture in your mind
That will last a life time

Submitted on 2008-08-06 15:09:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  What a delightful gift, in July, and at anytime! This was fun, mischevious, and very sensual! I liked it!
| Posted on 2009-10-17 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  Very sweet piece, and soooo very, very romantical!! loved it! bravo... bravo... bravo..
| Posted on 2008-08-13 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]

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