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    dots Submission Name: The "outside" Questiondots
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    Author: every48seconds
    ASL Info:    25/M/toronto
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 123/163/129
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe "outside" Questiondots
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    I look out at the world
    Feeling peace and disgust at the same time
    Peace of mind, body, soul
    Relaxation and serenity
    At that same moment I feel sick in the inner most depths of my stomach
    At the way people move, think, act
    I stop and look at myself
    Thinking if I'm any different
    If I act without reason
    Move through without consideration
    Think so lowly of others
    And I do, sadly
    So I look out at the world
    Thinking if I deserve to look
    As an individual or as a collective






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