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    dots Submission Name: Diversiondots
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    Author: dismal_s child
    ASL Info:    17/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 325/318/125
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
    Total Views: 69
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1003



    Description:
       A compilation of my thoughts.


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    dotsDiversiondots
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    Truths,
    Half eaten lies,
    spill from your tongue.
    Breathe
    then sing.
    I won't leave without you.
    Self Medicate,
    Numb the inside.
    Kill the voices.
    I won't leave without you.
    Truths
    Half eaten lies
    Circle jeering laughing at me.
    Speak,
    Then Leave.
    I won't know without you,
    Read
    Think
    Explain
    then Runaway.
    I won't know without you.
    Save my life.
    Truth. Or Lie.
    Can you feel me?
    Lingering under you,
    under your touch
    or pulling away,
    I lie too much.
    I've got nothing to Hide,
    But, still, I lie.
    It's just a matter of time.
    Before I stutter, and cry,
    Like every time,
    I even try.
    Can you feel bone,
    Against Bone?
    Hand against hand?
    Am I a lost cause?
    Are we Lost?
    I've got nothing to hide.




    Submitted on 2008-08-06 20:27:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      baby
    whats wrong ?
    why do you keep bring up lies what are you lying about
    baby I'm kinda worried now
    but good writing btw
    ~Darrell
    | Posted on 2008-08-07 00:00:00 | by anguished_child | [ Reply to This ]
      compilation of thoughts huh? pretty good then, liked it, tried something like this, messed up, you do well.
    | Posted on 2008-08-07 00:00:00 | by every48seconds | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked reading this u put alot of thoughts into it. i only wish i new wat u where thinking about.
    | Posted on 2008-08-06 00:00:00 | by essence of life | [ Reply to This ]


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