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    dots Submission Name: You did everythingdots

    Author: koolness
    ASL Info:    17/female/city of evil
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 80/106/56
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsYou did everythingdots

    You do everything...you make me laugh when I don't want to smile...you make me feel like I can be loved for who I am....you can tear me down with just a look....you take my heart and watch it with your life...and decide to crush it.....everything.... you did everything. You are my everything....your my laugh, my cry, my heart, my soul...

    Submitted on 2008-08-07 20:36:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow...sounds like love! lol great how you depict the exact power someone can have over you when you're head over heels ;)
    | Posted on 2008-08-08 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]

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