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    dots Submission Name: The internetdots
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    Author: lolavie
    ASL Info:    23/female/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 70/175/103
    Words: 425
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 663
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2690



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    dotsThe internetdots
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    Facebook says you're in a new relationship
    I don't believe it
    I can't conceive it

    Myspace says you're in L-A with your sweetheart
    You can't afford it
    I know you're home alone

    I hate the internet
    We just believe the lies
    Dramanet stalkernet
    They just ruin my life
    I hate the worldwideweb
    It takes up all my time
    I should be working instead
    But I cant seem to tear myself from the internet

    www
    chat rooms
    social communities I find online
    Found love, dumped someone on the internet
    I bet they stalked me then talked to me as if they just met me on the internet
    Hackers pack their notebooks with their cyber deciphering
    Change your password one a week
    to hide from spammers you must tweak to lowercase one capitol include a number high or low just to keep your privacy on the internet

    Bebo just sent you an email from Janet Smith
    But dont believe it
    Just delete it

    Febo is a new site requesting you to join
    But when you receive it
    Dont be decieved

    by the internet
    We just believe the lies
    Dramanet stalkernet
    They just ruin my life
    I hate the worldwideweb
    It takes up all my time
    I should be working instead
    But I cant seem to tear myself from the internet

    www
    chat rooms
    social communities I find online
    Found love, dumped someone on the internet
    I bet they stalked me then talked to me as if they just met me on the internet
    Hackers pack their notebooks with their cyber deciphering
    Change your password one a week
    or to hide from spammers you must tweak to lowercase one capitol include a number high or low just to keep your privacy on the internet

    Are you a creeper-logging on 10 times a day
    just to see if someone from Australia replied to the long text they sent you last week on the internet?

    Are you a freak who joined a dating site then
    posted all the pics of you
    all closeup hoping you could gain 2,000 views a day on the internet

    Are you yourself on the internet? Someone else on the internet? It's amazing who you can be on the internet.

    I love the internet
    We just believe the lies
    Dramanet stalkernet
    distract me from my own life
    I love the worldwideweb
    It takes up all my time
    I should be working instead
    But I cant seem to tear myself from the internet




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    ||| Comments |||
      We shall all soon be banished to Cyberia - www.my legs have atrophied from sitting in a chair for ten days.com. Nicely written blurb against the evils of mindless wanderings through round cubicles looking for the chatroom in the corner. I will certainly have a look at more of your writes.

    Take care
    Bill
    | Posted on 2008-08-08 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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