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    dots Submission Name: Unhealthydots
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    Author: LovelyGoddess
    ASL Info:    20/F/SC
    Elite Ratio:    2.36 - 125/89/82
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 48
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 734



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    There are things I should tell you, things I need to say.
    I miss you, though I dissed you, and drove you away.
    A letter from my heart, because I can't think with my head.
    It's probably the reason our relationship is dead.
    To think that I would long for you every single day.
    If spoke this to you, can't imagine the words you'd say,
    the emotions you would spray, feelings blunt and plain.
    I must be an idiot for accepting this pain.
    You used to be a man I honestly would have wanted,
    a man I could have married, love I could have flaunted.
    A man you were then but now you're just a babe.
    A puke I need to swallow, unhealthy to crave.




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    ||| Comments |||
      Sixth line says "If spoke this to you..". You should try doing some lyrical stuff or maybe raps. You could come up with some cool songs I bet. The line "A puke I need to swallow" is unforgettable!
    | Posted on 2008-08-08 00:00:00 | by ArchusMuta | [ Reply to This ]



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