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    dots Submission Name: I laugh at you.dots
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    Author: BestxDeceptions
    ASL Info:    18, Female, Kentucky.
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 22/49/41
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 114
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 670



    Description:
       Random venting mainly.


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    dotsI laugh at you.dots
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    You don't
    believe that I'm strong.
    You've never once
    accepted that
    I am wonderful.

    If I ever
    made you feel
    in the least
    intimidated,
    you've hid it.

    I am
    what I am.
    I cannot help that
    sometimes I'm much
    better than you are.

    So, the next time
    I tell you that I
    think that word
    should be replaced,
    don't tell me I'm wrong.

    You write for you,
    I write for me- and
    when I read your
    poetry, I laugh.
    It's horrible,
    and so are you.




    Submitted on 2008-08-08 03:50:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow. A horrible poet? I didn't think such a thing existed. (jk). Having a poetry war with someone? You guys exchange an emotional lashing? If they are really junky just tell them they are an awesome poet that will do more harm than good. ;D
    | Posted on 2008-08-08 00:00:00 | by ArchusMuta | [ Reply to This ]


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