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    Author: BestxDeceptions
    ASL Info:    18, Female, Kentucky.
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 22/49/41
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    At one point I
    said that poets
    feel more sharply
    than your average
    person.

    I doubt that.

    I'm most certain
    that poets are just
    more relaxed at
    telling the world their
    problems.

    What's yours?

    Mine, you ask?

    If you haven't noticed,
    my teenage heart
    has been broken,
    by a boy that

    Isn't worth my
    time.

    So, when you
    read my work,
    please tell me,
    do you believe that,
    I feel more strongly

    than you?




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    ||| Comments |||
      No. You know that moving on doesn't undermine the potency of your love. It just means that you have succeeded where so many others fail. Some people just fail to identify or even acknowledge that they feel. They live like robots without inflecting or digging deep to find out who they are. Some people are really at an emotional deficit. They should discover writing, huh?
    | Posted on 2008-08-08 00:00:00 | by ArchusMuta | [ Reply to This ]


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