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    dots Submission Name: It comes to an enddots
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    Author: sapphyreravyn
    ASL Info:    16/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.45 - 3/15/21
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 67
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 473



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    dotsIt comes to an enddots
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    As I lay here
    I watch you sleep.
    I am content
    With your peaceful expression.
    I want to hold you
    Keep you here forever.
    Soon you'll wake,
    And leave as you must.
    Few days left for us.
    The world is moving faster
    Moving us forward like a current.
    Soon summer will be fall
    And you will be gone.
    I'll be alone again.
    I feel I'll die
    Without you here with me.




    Submitted on 2008-08-08 08:50:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like your poem, it's very heartfelt and I can relate to it. Well done

    Nibbs
    | Posted on 2008-08-09 00:00:00 | by Nibbs | [ Reply to This ]



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