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Elderly waltzing, laughing, ‘til early morn’ sun: How funny Prunes taste

Submitted on 2008-08-08 08:54:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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very original , to the point , it has a twist of humor, good poem

| Posted on 2009-04-14 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

i like prunes.

| Posted on 2008-08-08 00:00:00 | by Boosky | [ Reply to This ]

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