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    dots Submission Name: evermore dots
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    Author: Polydectes
    ASL Info:    29/m/South Africa
    Elite Ratio:    7.84 - 154/85/38
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
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    Elderly waltzing,
    laughing, ‘til early morn’ sun:
    How funny Prunes taste




    Submitted on 2008-08-08 08:54:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very original , to the point , it has a twist of humor, good poem
    | Posted on 2009-04-14 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]
      i like prunes.
    | Posted on 2008-08-08 00:00:00 | by Boosky | [ Reply to This ]


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