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Author: Polydectes
ASL Info:    29/m/South Africa
Elite Ratio:    7.84 - 154 /85 /38
Words: 14
Class/Type: Haiku /Misc
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Elderly waltzing,
laughing, ‘til early morn’ sun:
How funny Prunes taste




Submitted on 2008-08-08 08:54:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  very original , to the point , it has a twist of humor, good poem
| Posted on 2009-04-14 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]
  i like prunes.
| Posted on 2008-08-08 00:00:00 | by Boosky | [ Reply to This ]


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