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Submission Name: evermore dots

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Author:	Polydectes
ASL Info:	29/m/South Africa
Elite Ratio:	7.84 - 154/85/38
Words:	14

Class/Type:	Haiku/Misc
Total Views:	871
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	96

Description:
a repost,

evermore dots

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Elderly waltzing,
laughing, ‘til early morn’ sun:
How funny Prunes taste

Submitted on 2008-08-08 08:54:44 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
very original , to the point , it has a twist of humor, good poem
| Posted on 2009-04-14 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]
i like prunes.
| Posted on 2008-08-08 00:00:00 | by Boosky | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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