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    dots Submission Name: divine interventiondots
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    Author: XxMusikJunkiexX
    ASL Info:    18/f/ny
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 109/134/39
    Words: 356
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 954
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2134



    Description:
       .: a song my guitarist wrote, and our last song for our demo tape :.


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    dotsdivine interventiondots
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    I could not live no one could answer my cries
    Then with you I had no reason for early good byes
    Youíre the warmth that allowed the darkness to give way
    Itís a feeling I hope will always stay

    Waking up to your voice waking up to my angel
    You are my safe haven when Iím not able
    To find the things that once captivated me
    Youíre my savior from a monster I was to be
    To be, to be

    Prec:
    Your breath, it helps me breathe
    A breath of fresh air is something I desperately need

    Because Iíve hit rock bottom and ive tasted the floor
    It was not something I had tasted before
    I called for god for what thought would be
    The last time I would ever speak
    I did not expect someone would answer me
    Answer me

    c:
    Cause you can lift me higher far from myself
    And somehow you can always help
    When Iím down and things seem to fall apart
    You are my miracle and gods greatest work of art

    v:
    The miracle in your eyes, green, blue, or gray
    So pure that only a god could create
    I feel your heart so faint to the touch
    If Iím dreaming never wake me up

    You are a shock to bring me back to something that is real
    Lifeís not so bad as long as Iím able to feel
    So I can feel my heart beat faster at the touch of your lips
    A moment of perfection frozen at my fingertips

    Prec>c

    Bridge:
    A creation of god
    A mass of perfection
    A tender kiss
    Of lasting affection
    A work of beauty
    And a grand blue sky
    Reminds me of you
    Reminds me of why
    Youíre something I can finally hold on to

    Prec:
    Because Iíve hit rock bottom and ive tasted the floor
    It was not something I had tasted before
    I called for god for what thought would be
    The last time I would ever speak
    I did not expect someone would rescue me
    Answer me

    chorus






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      wow... this is gorgeous! what kinda groove does your band go for? a demo tape... with this song on it... its gotta be awesome! this was gorgeous and i think i mostly loved the pre chorus... ive hit rock bottom and tasted the ground... thats more than rock bottom... thats like falling face down on rock bottom... not something most ppl manage to do... not something any one wants to do but i think if you do you can then appreciate life a whole lot more on the way back up... but yeah... good luck with everything... i hope your band does awesomely... whats your bands name by the way...?
    | Posted on 2004-10-07 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, these lyrics were really touching. i can only hope that with music they are even more powerful. what genre is your band, rock, punk, rap, metal? (something else entirely?) i hope to hear you on the radio someday with this song...
    ~Heather~
    | Posted on 2004-07-06 00:00:00 | by Hethabell_13 | [ Reply to This ]


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