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    dots Submission Name: i wish i could love you like i want todots
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    Author: Ali Marie
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 105/106/76
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsi wish i could love you like i want todots
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    I wish I could love you like I want to.
    Just to close my eyes,
    Be in your arms,
    And feel that tingle,
    Lost in your charm.
    But my heartís taken itís own sweet time,
    Iím afraid Iím not ready for you to be mine.
    If I stand by you, for the rest of our days,
    I would honored, to be called yours.
    But thereís just one problem,
    I canít seem to grasp that feeling.





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