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    Author: BlueTorcher
    Elite Ratio:    4.67 - 79/97/96
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 796
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 779



    Description:
       Wrote it a few weeks ago, just never got around to posting it


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    I turn around and look at you
    A frown upon my face
    Only to see you working, hard away

    Until you look
    Into my face
    Suprising like a new day

    Looking at me
    You start to smile
    Staring straight into my eyes

    My stomach flutters
    My heart stops
    As you continue to hold me
    In your watch

    Your eye pierce me
    Like two thorny trees
    Giving my the deadliest of hugs

    Never the less I feel love

    My face aglow
    My skin pricked
    As I wonder at your enchantment

    Wondering away
    Still half dazed
    I stop and think

    What would happen
    If i returned your gaze




    Submitted on 2008-08-10 18:43:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow. I think you just summed up the greatest love of all. Keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2008-08-11 00:00:00 | by Rachel Ruff | [ Reply to This ]
      wow..............GOOD JOB..........lol.......I mean lol......you're on to something there......keep it up!
    | Posted on 2008-08-10 00:00:00 | by Blackphoenix14 | [ Reply to This ]


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