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    dots Submission Name: In Good Timedots

    Author: my shadow
    Elite Ratio:    4.82 - 291/150/48
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Childrens
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       This is about the army of words. Something fun for children

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    dotsIn Good Timedots

    In Good Time

    In perfect rhythm we do rhyme
    marching lockstep in good time.
    All come see us on parade
    dressed in uniform tailor made.
    Up in front are the very tall
    going down to the very small

    We hail from many nations:
    we all have many relations.
    Some of us are most bold,
    with our tales often told.
    Others of us may be weak
    yet none of us is truly meek.

    Alone we do not matter much
    just some noise or such.
    But arranged by a master's hand
    we stand a mighty band.
    In books you will find
    barracks for our kind.

    Submitted on 2008-08-11 04:24:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "By master's hand" says it all! I really enjoyed this piece!
    There is so much potential for us to continually expand his creatION ~*~ with smiles to share ;-)
    | Posted on 2011-07-30 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this one. It shows how we are all different and the same. How we are remembered, how humans act and in some form we are zombie-slaves to where we come from. I like how you put "Others of us may be week but none of us are truly meek"

    Good job!
    | Posted on 2008-12-12 00:00:00 | by amanda99737 | [ Reply to This ]

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