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    dots Submission Name: Listening to silence diedots
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    Author: Sirbongatron
    ASL Info:    19/M/NC
    Elite Ratio:    4.74 - 19/18/21
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
    Total Views: 84
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 554



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    dotsListening to silence diedots
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    That’s society back there; behind me.
    They don’t matter.
    Words whirlwind with the wind
    And I let the darkness pour in--from butt littered curb
    I see the beauty in this dying earth
    Fire dances ‘cross mountain top;
    Green lights of man fade red. Flash yellow.
    Clouds whisk and serpentine; moon glistens on naked pines
    These winks in time, tricks of the mind
    That’s the beauty.
    That’s sorrow’s crime,
    Because society is back there
    A few feet away
    And they do matter.




    Submitted on 2008-08-11 05:04:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm going to be honest at first it made perfect sense but as the poem went on I didn't really understand it. Maybe I missed a vital part in the poem. But I doubt it because I read it three times. Perhaps a little more insight as to what you are trying to express.
    | Posted on 2008-08-11 00:00:00 | by Rachel Ruff | [ Reply to This ]



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