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    dots Submission Name: Not Realdots
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    Author: PryncessVynom
    ASL Info:    23/F/WV!!
    Elite Ratio:    3.35 - 1001/1073/242
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsNot Realdots
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    I am not a real person. I am the reflection of those around me. When I am with her, I'm nonchalant, funny and flip.
    When I'm with you, I'm dark, goth, and quiet.
    When I'm alone I'm a void, I'm a dying flower sending out my roots, reaching for any drop of someone else to bloom.




    Submitted on 2008-08-11 05:06:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Dismal, this unreal person. Not knowing her own value or feelings, she feeds off others. A lot of that these days as traditional values are questioned but not replaced with anything except consumerism. It's a dead end with nowhere to go. Real good poem.
    | Posted on 2008-08-11 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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