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    dots Submission Name: Mr. Armstrongdots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    26/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 162/239/241
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 616
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 759



    Description:
       i love you john, my lover :)


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    dotsMr. Armstrongdots
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    I think I may have found,
    What Iíve been looking for,
    My soul mate,
    In a six foot one package,
    With awesome blue eyes,
    And an awesome accent,

    My significant other,
    My one and only,
    Heís amazing,
    And so different from the rest,
    I so love him for ever,

    I canít wait to feel his arms,
    His kiss,
    His love in my soul,
    In more than words,
    But actions as well,

    Heís the only one for me,
    And I try to be his everything,
    As amazing as he is to me,
    I try to show him I need him,
    That Iíd be lost without him,
    My love is true and pure,

    I will always love you.






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