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    dots Submission Name: Re-write the code (Tanka)dots
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    Author: Duke Medhat
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Egypt
    Elite Ratio:    5.08 - 58/38/24
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 589
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 161



    Description:
       Code here means the statute of our university


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    dotsRe-write the code (Tanka)dots
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    Letís go to our den
    Where nobody can find us
    And re-write the code

    Not searching for happiness
    But searching for the pleasure




    Submitted on 2008-08-12 14:03:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really loved your poem, unfortunately i haven't seen the original. I just wish it was so easy to rewrite that code, in the search for that pleasure. I guess its true what they say, home is were happiness lays.

    Thanks for a delightful read,
    | Posted on 2008-08-12 00:00:00 | by Polydectes | [ Reply to This ]


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