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    dots Submission Name: Let's Be Like Romeo And Julietdots
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    Author: BrokenAngelKat
    ASL Info:    18-F-NC
    Elite Ratio:    1.67 - 102/231/186
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 50
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    Bytes: 455



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       ~* Let's Be Like Romeo And Juliet.. And Fall In Love.. Just To Die *~


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    dotsLet's Be Like Romeo And Julietdots
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    You can be my Romeo.
    I'll be your Juliet.
    Give me many years of bliss..
    I'm not ready to die yet..

    We can fall in love..
    And live forever just you and me..
    And then we can die together..
    After we've been all that we can be.

    I'm not asking for now..
    Things are so confused..
    But one day I plan to win you back..
    Because I have nothing to lose.




    Submitted on 2008-08-12 17:50:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      For some reason, I see this concept coming up a lot. This whole "Let's be together against all odds" kind of thing. It's a strange idea in my opinion. The future is so unknown to everyone. No one can ever tell when meteors will strike the earth, or the sun will go out. Still, it's a romantic idea, which I guess is the reason so many poems are written about it.

    Technically this poem is sound. Maybe a little short. It feels like something is missing for me. I wish I knew more, actually. I know all the FACTS, but that's not really what I want from a poem, non?

    Wishing for more
    ~Brian
    | Posted on 2008-08-14 00:00:00 | by Imadjinn | [ Reply to This ]



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