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    dots Submission Name: Trapped within realitydots
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    Author: girly101
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 269/227/132
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsTrapped within realitydots
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    Bound in chains, sanity flees
    ignoreing all her screaming pleas.
    Keep her locked up, shes becoming well,
    her tears are fake, cant you tell?

    Keeping me locked up in this cage,
    with their poison drugs they stifle my rage.
    Live like me and you will see,
    why I need so bad to escape reality.

    In my mind my thoughts are barred,
    on the outside my skin is scarred.
    Dreams come to me everynight,
    of freedom just within my sight.

    Through your teeth you whisper lies
    Inside my mind my hope dies.
    With nothing left to say,
    Inside my head I tiredly lay.




    Submitted on 2008-08-12 18:07:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This had amazing imagery and definitely left an impression in my mind. I felt that anger and frustration I think you were trying to portray.
    But was the misspelling of fleas intentional? The one I think you mean is flees.
    But overall, I thought it was really good.
    | Posted on 2008-10-06 00:00:00 | by bananafish | [ Reply to This ]


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