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    dots Submission Name: You're not heredots
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    Author: twistedchick
    ASL Info:    17/girlie/United Kingdom
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 14/39/52
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
    Total Views: 65
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    Bytes: 842



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    dotsYou're not heredots
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    Where you are I never seem to know
    But I know that I am still here
    Why is it when I start to put these pieces back together?
    Something happened with us and there are scattered everywhere again
    You’re hurt I know this but you put me in your shadows every time
    I want to help, can’t you let me be you’re light
    I can’t hold on if you’re drifting away
    If you’re keeping secrets from me
    The where is the honesty in this relationship?
    You’ve turned away, when I take two steps forward
    You’ll take three back
    I’m completely devastated
    I want you to come put me back together
    But your not here
    Your still not here
    They say once their gone
    They never come back
    But I won’t believe that
    I’ll stay here…
    Waiting.




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